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Hotel Guinevere  

Ultraviolet_Sol 43M
156 posts
5/14/2021 10:31 pm
Hotel Guinevere

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Ultraviolet_Sol 43M
622 posts
5/14/2021 11:03 pm

Hotel Guinevere

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Black velveteen - Cascades of shadows.
An appearance at the door.
Such a world to explore.
The strange land of my mind... Comes alive.

All you are... Is a precipice of silence.
Enjoining to my... Mountainous stance.

Spirals of days (+) nights... Adjacent.
Have arrived... Here - To this moment.

Where space (+) time will take us -
Who can say - In my... Expanding focus.

I just know -
You look like a witchy woman tonight.

In that... Clothing of midnight.

And I... Need you to cast a spell on me.
Or continue the spell... So witchily.

As the candlelight of the room
Lies in your eyes... Sublime.

Like pyres (+) fires
In the centers of stone henges.

All I see is desires
As your rolling imagination unhinges.

II

Your body heat... Is a radiant cosmology.
Interactive... Like time lapsed photography.

I become a texture... A velveteen mixture.
Scintillating.
Undiscovered nerve endings I discover.

And you...
You connect to me in a black supernova.
And I...
Absorb the fragments that fall all over

My bedroom... Formerly a gulf of darkness.
Opens into a black velveteen of the iris of Isis.

I don't know what Heaven is
But it must shorely be something like this.

I don't know what to say... So I just...
Admire your way (+) give you my trust

And give over - To the dark river
Of love become lust.

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Audio at... LINKTR.EE/UPSIDEDOWNSKY

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SweetMysterie 51F
3641 posts
5/15/2021 5:57 am

You have such a wonderful way with words that immerses the reader into your world. The images you convey and the senses you include take us on that journey with you.

I especially appreciate the way you use rhyme and consonance within certain phrases like . . . "a precipice of silence" and "I become a texture... A velveteen mixture."

So much expression. You have a gift. Thanks for sharing it with us here.



“As with the butterfly, adversity is necessary to build character in people.” ~ JB Wirthlin



senfully 55F  
443 posts
5/15/2021 7:50 am

Your writing is distinctive. I'd know it is you with your use of symbols, and your words. Your words paint pictures, but also let my mind contribute to what is seen. The words are so pleasing to the ear (and mind). I talk about rhyme and meter sometimes, and I know they can make poems have more of an impact. This is lovely and subtle. Thank you for sharing yourself.


Ultraviolet_Sol 43M
622 posts
5/15/2021 4:05 pm

    Quoting  :

Indeed...

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Ultraviolet_Sol 43M
622 posts
5/15/2021 4:05 pm

    Quoting  :

That is a very kind compliment, Joy... Thank you.

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Ultraviolet_Sol 43M
622 posts
5/15/2021 4:06 pm

    Quoting SweetMysterie:
    You have such a wonderful way with words that immerses the reader into your world. The images you convey and the senses you include take us on that journey with you.

    I especially appreciate the way you use rhyme and consonance within certain phrases like . . . "a precipice of silence" and "I become a texture... A velveteen mixture."

    So much expression. You have a gift. Thanks for sharing it with us here.
Thank You.



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Ultraviolet_Sol 43M
622 posts
5/15/2021 4:09 pm

    Quoting senfully:
    Your writing is distinctive. I'd know it is you with your use of symbols, and your words. Your words paint pictures, but also let my mind contribute to what is seen. The words are so pleasing to the ear (and mind). I talk about rhyme and meter sometimes, and I know they can make poems have more of an impact. This is lovely and subtle. Thank you for sharing yourself.
That is so insightful...

I am greatly humbled by your very kind words... Thank you S...

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scoupe42 60M

5/18/2021 5:37 pm

Through her, you created a beautiful , sensual, a godess!


Ultraviolet_Sol 43M
622 posts
5/19/2021 6:16 pm

    Quoting scoupe42:
    Through her, you created a beautiful , sensual, a godess!
Thank you Scoupe! That is very insightful...

I do so love a godess...

They are certainly very rare... but they are windows or gateways or portals or stargates....

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hotdreamer1000 64M
12409 posts
5/24/2021 8:08 am

I think this is a picture of my imagined cyber lover. She doesn't quite look real, but real enough for her to be on the right side of my Uncanny Valley. Can you please arrange for her to come round my house and ask for a bunk-up?


Ultraviolet_Sol 43M
622 posts
5/25/2021 2:29 am

She is now signing up for a gold membership and will be contacting you forthwith.

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