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How to build a fire  

senfully 55F  
618 posts
4/13/2021 7:57 am
How to build a fire

voluptuous words hang volcanically
—Jane Miller, "Oh Pioneers", Gift of Tongues

How to build a fire
written March th, 2021

The weight of her breasts
fill my hands
the heat we both crave
hangs volcanically in the air
our bodies
come together
then part
keeping
the simmering air
between her skin and mine

the near - the far - the almost
yearning for all at once
my wet tongue
starts little fires
moving from breast
to belly
to thigh
always returning to
her voluptuous breasts

my hand between her legs
her leg between mine
we kindle the flames
with the friction of our bodies
until orgasms erupt
in the now tropical air

the flames we so diligently nurtured
with skin and tongue and touch
are now quenched as
our bodies meld together
all distance-space-separation gone
laughter fills the air
as the sweat evaporates
off our spent bodies.

senfully 55F  
443 posts
4/13/2021 7:59 am

 The inspiring poem wasn't erotic, but that line made me think of so many things that were erotic. I like the idea of the other woman in the poem being also me, trying to learn to be in and love my body.


69ereatwetpussy 61M
6774 posts
4/13/2021 8:36 am

 All it takes is a spark
The right condition
The fuel to keep the amber going

To keep the fire burning
One needs to add to it
Stoke it
Feed it

Once the fire is drawing
Enjoy it
Enjoy how it feels around you
How it drive you wild for more

Then it most be controlled
Contained it one area
Watch it burn down slowly
Remember how it felt

How it will feel again
When you light the next match
And start it all over again


senfully replies on 4/14/2021 6:30 am:
I thought of you as I was writing this! I should have asked you about fire words lol. I knew you'd know. Thank you for your response, it's lovely. Hugs!

kamaruhl3 63M
4985 posts
4/13/2021 8:50 am

 so yummy. you got me hard and ready to cum for you


senfully replies on 4/14/2021 6:30 am:
Always nice when my words have an impact. Hugs!

flannel_light 61F
4586 posts
4/13/2021 9:32 am

 That is a Nice one👍
The Light is shinning and she is lonely and waiting in the darkness.


senfully replies on 4/14/2021 6:31 am:
Thank you! Always nice to see you here.

fang070 53M
1309 posts
4/13/2021 10:12 am

 I remember you have written about the creative side of readers bringing up their own rythm to your words, and setting up a personnel punctuation, but honestly, today I'm really missing commas, colons, stops, etc, for a more ready-to-read version

I'm getting beautiful sentences and beautiful words, but have not been able to found the whole poem myself. Probably just me being tired, and of course not being enough fluent in English.
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senfully replies on 4/14/2021 6:33 am:
Thank you for this comment. I usually write without punctuation. Sometimes the stanzas are a sentence, sometimes not. The line breaks are where I pause when I read it. The line breaks and pauses here would make it very difficult for reading comprehension. All of our different languages are a wealth and also sometimes a barrier. I read your works in translation and I know that takes much away from your poems.

MrWrong4RghtNow 57M
2439 posts
4/14/2021 12:03 am

 I could make a comment about white hot lava and eruptions but that would cheapen your fine effort. Finding eroticism and making it work on both levels is tricky. You succeeded. Bravo.
My name is MrWrong and I approved this comment


senfully replies on 4/14/2021 6:35 am:
That's the fun of it all. You read and think what you do, as I do as I'm writing it. I wanted to do more with weather systems and volcanoes, but got tired and overwhelmed. Glad to see you here! Hugs!

Ultraviolet_Sol 43M
622 posts
4/14/2021 11:59 pm
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